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The ghost in the floor |
| This is something i made up.it is looking into the eyes of a six year old girl named Elizabeth Montlee.I hope you guys enjoy. _______________________________________________________________________________Hello.My name is Elizabeth Montlee and I am six years old.Just last month,my grandfather had passed away.My parents were so heartbroken they said we had no choice but to move.We had searched many towns and finally found the right place.It was a rather large building and it was almost in the middle of nowhere.We had been told it was a hotel that ran out of business,but no matter what it was,it gave me the creeps.Now dont get me wrong,It looked pretty nice,but something just told me it was trouble.I tried to stop my parents from buying it but by the time i talked to them it was too late.They had already purchased it and the man had left.My mother was so happy that she ran straight in."Hurry and pick your room,Elizabeth!",I heard mother shout.Feeling a little uneasy,i slowly walked in.When i reached the door i smelt a strong,unpleasant odor.I didnt see anything that could be causing the smell,though.I asked my parents if they could smell it,but they both gave me a strange look and said no.I quickly forgot about it and began looking in rooms.most of them were very common,a white bed,a small wooden dresser and a chair.But only one room stuck out from the rest.The bed was pink and fluffy,there were many pillows and in the corner of the room,there was a pink dresser.It looked just like Elizabeths old room.She didn't bother looking at any other rooms,she knew this was the best one.A few hours passed by quickly,when she heard a voice say "Help me" it sounded like it was coming from the floor.elizabeth looked down,but noone was there.Again the voice said "Help me!" except fainter.Finally there was silence for a few seconds,but then she heard a scream louder than a building crashing.Elizabeth instantly ran to her parents screaming."DID YOU GUYS HEAR THAT?!",she screamed at the top of her lungs."What are you talking about.",her mother asked.Elizibeth was as freaked out as ever.She ran to her room for some alone time.after a few minutes of relaxazion and thinking,banging started coming from the ground.Then out of nowhere a faint apparition of a kid elizabeths age appeared.she said "Help me,im under here".Elizabeth,being young,but still knowing what to do,ran to her parents."Mom dad i need you to dig up a spot in the floor!"."Why?",both her parents replied at the same time."Please mom and dad"Elizabeth said."You can trust me.".Her parents knew Elizabeth wouldnt change her mind,so her dad got an axe and started digging...until he reached something soft and poofy-like a ballroom dress.The dad,sorta freaked out kept digging upward.finally,they saw a face.half of it was gone,and only a skull was showing.The family,not really knowing what to do,called the cops.The cops then came and took the body for examination.It turned out,A young girl about the age 7 named Melissa Grey.She went to a dance with her mom.When the little girl was away from her mother a man named Gerald Fern kidnapped her.Gerald rented a room at the hotel for her to stay in because he didnt want them to know he kidnapped her.He stayed with her,but she cried so much he murdered her-and with no where to put her he buried her in the floor.After a month he admited he murdered her but he wouldnt tell where he buried her-and now they knew.Before the burial took place elizabeth wished to be alone with the body.Since Elizabeth was brave enough to do this whole thing-they agreed to let her.Right when she saw the body,she stopped.The same apparition the girl saw before appeared again.But instead of saying help me and screaming,she gave the girl a smile and said "Thank you,you freed my soul".and dissapeared.Elizabeth came back to her mom proudly."What happened,and why did you want to see her?"."Its a long story.."Elizabeth said and let out a faint smile. |
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| Shortieinpink05 |
11/27/2005 9:26:00 PM |
This is pretty interesting but you jump from first person dialog to third person which makes it really confusing. :) |
| Boredness |
11/27/2005 10:32:00 PM |
okay i'll work on that =) |
| AmorSea |
7/11/2006 10:21:00 AM |
This was a pretty good freaky story. Pssh, my parents would never dig up the floor for me. Good job! |
| -BAMBI- |
9/13/2006 3:44:00 PM |
wow,wow,wow,wow,wow,wow!creepy but kinda sweet |
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